doc: Small fixes to documentation (#1783)

docs/modules/usage/about.md

@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Now we have both Slack workspace for the collaboration on building OpenDevin and
 - [Slack workspace](https://join.slack.com/t/opendevin/shared_invite/zt-2ggtwn3k5-PvAA2LUmqGHVZ~XzGq~ILw)
 - [Discord server](https://discord.gg/ESHStjSjD4)
 
-If you would love to contribute, feel free to join our community (note that now there is no need to fill in the [form](https://forms.gle/758d5p6Ve8r2nxxq6)). Let's simplify software engineering together!
+If you would love to contribute, feel free to join our community. Let's simplify software engineering together!
 
 🐚 **Code less, make more with OpenDevin.**
 

docs/modules/usage/intro.mdx

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Explore the codebase of OpenDevin on [GitHub](https://github.com/OpenDevin/OpenD
 
 The easiest way to run OpenDevin is inside a Docker container.
 
-To start the app, run these commands, replacing `$(pwd)/workspace` with the path to the code you want OpenDevin to work with.
+To start the app, run these commands, replacing `$(pwd)/workspace` with the directory you want OpenDevin to work with.
 
 ```
 # Your OpenAI API key, or any other LLM API key

docs/modules/usage/llms/llms.md

@@ -44,4 +44,4 @@ are actively working on building better open source models!
 
 Some LLMs have rate limits and may require retries. OpenDevin will automatically retry requests if it receives a 429 error or API connection error.
 You can set `LLM_NUM_RETRIES`, `LLM_RETRY_MIN_WAIT`, `LLM_RETRY_MAX_WAIT` environment variables to control the number of retries and the time between retries.
-By default, `LLM_NUM_RETRIES` is 5 and `LLM_RETRY_MIN_WAIT`, `LLM_RETRY_MAX_WAIT` are 3 seconds and respectively 60 seconds.
+By default, `LLM_NUM_RETRIES` is 5 and `LLM_RETRY_MIN_WAIT`, `LLM_RETRY_MAX_WAIT` are 3 seconds and 60 seconds respectively.

docs/modules/usage/llms/localLLMs.md

@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 # Local LLM with Ollama
 
 Ensure that you have the Ollama server up and running.
-For detailed startup instructions, refer to the [here](https://github.com/ollama/ollama)
+For detailed startup instructions, refer to [here](https://github.com/ollama/ollama)
 
-This guide assumes you've started ollama with `ollama serve`. If you're running ollama differently (e.g. inside docker), the instructions might need to be modified. Please note that if you're running wsl the default ollama configuration blocks requests from docker containers. See [here](#4-configuring-the-ollama-service-wsl).
+This guide assumes you've started ollama with `ollama serve`. If you're running ollama differently (e.g. inside docker), the instructions might need to be modified. Please note that if you're running WSL the default ollama configuration blocks requests from docker containers. See [here](#configuring-the-ollama-service-wsl).
 
 ## Pull Models
 
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ And now you're ready to go!
 
 ## Configuring the ollama service (WSL)
 
-The default configuration for ollama in wsl only serves localhost. This means you can't reach it from a docker container. eg. it wont work with OpenDevin. First let's test that ollama is running correctly.
+The default configuration for ollama in WSL only serves localhost. This means you can't reach it from a docker container. eg. it wont work with OpenDevin. First let's test that ollama is running correctly.
 
 ```bash
 ollama list # get list of installed models
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ curl http://localhost:11434/api/generate -d '{"model":"[NAME]","prompt":"hi"}'
 #ex. curl http://localhost:11434/api/generate -d '{"model":"codellama","prompt":"hi"}' #the tag is optional if there is only one
 ```
 
-Once that is done test that it allows "outside" requests, like those from inside a docker container.
+Once that is done, test that it allows "outside" requests, like those from inside a docker container.
 
 ```bash
 docker ps # get list of running docker containers, for most accurate test choose the open devin sandbox container.
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ docker exec [CONTAINER ID] curl http://host.docker.internal:11434/api/generate -
 
 ## Fixing it
 
-Now let's make it work, edit /etc/systemd/system/ollama.service with sudo privileges. (Path may vary depending on linux flavor)
+Now let's make it work. Edit /etc/systemd/system/ollama.service with sudo privileges. (Path may vary depending on linux flavor)
 
 ```bash
 sudo vi /etc/systemd/system/ollama.service

docs/modules/usage/troubleshooting/windows.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Please be sure to run all commands inside your WSL terminal.
 
 ### Failed to create opendevin user
 
-If you encounter the following error during setup: `Exception: Failed to create opendevin user in sandbox: b'useradd: UID 0 is not unique\n'`
+If you encounter the following error during setup: `Exception: Failed to create opendevin user in sandbox: b'useradd: UID 0 is not unique\n'`.
 You can resolve it by running:
 `    export SANDBOX_USER_ID=1000
    `
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ If you face issues running Poetry even after installing it during the build proc
 
 ### NoneType object has no attribute 'request'
 
-If you experiencing issues related to networking, such as `NoneType object has no attribute 'request'` when executing `make run`, you may need to configure your WSL2 networking settings. Follow these steps:
+If you are experiencing issues related to networking, such as `NoneType object has no attribute 'request'` when executing `make run`, you may need to configure your WSL2 networking settings. Follow these steps:
 
 - Open or create the `.wslconfig` file located at `C:\Users\%username%\.wslconfig` on your Windows host machine.
 - Add the following configuration to the `.wslconfig` file: